Nina, Good work - but you've submitted too many drawings. Just submit your best work. If you need to separate out figures and composite them in a new image file, so be it.
I like that you're investigating gesture and different poses - continue to do this.
When shading in these drawings, try thinking about light before you think about the local color of what they're wearing (dark shirt, dark pants, i.e.). Also try to integrate the surroundings into the drawing more - you've begun to do this and I like it. Finally - once you establish the pose and the composition - work details in (faces, and hands, especially) This may require a lighter line, initially... that's okay. You can work into it.
Nina,
ReplyDeleteGood work - but you've submitted too many drawings. Just submit your best work. If you need to separate out figures and composite them in a new image file, so be it.
I like that you're investigating gesture and different poses - continue to do this.
When shading in these drawings, try thinking about light before you think about the local color of what they're wearing (dark shirt, dark pants, i.e.).
Also try to integrate the surroundings into the drawing more - you've begun to do this and I like it.
Finally - once you establish the pose and the composition - work details in (faces, and hands, especially) This may require a lighter line, initially... that's okay. You can work into it.
Cool collection, though I agree about wanting to see some hands and faces. I think that would help turn these into "characters" instead of "figures"
ReplyDeleteOoh, lots of variety here. Very neat.
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