Nina, Clean drawings and a generally solid form but it's onlty a start... and there's too much devotion to an even contour - it stiffens the gesture. Also, the poses are at profile or from the back. This may have been where you were sitting but turn the form to a more 3/4 pose - it allows more depth and a chance to draw a more dynamic pose (even if it's a sitting pose)
Nina,
ReplyDeleteClean drawings and a generally solid form but it's onlty a start... and there's too much devotion to an even contour - it stiffens the gesture.
Also, the poses are at profile or from the back. This may have been where you were sitting but turn the form to a more 3/4 pose - it allows more depth and a chance to draw a more dynamic pose (even if it's a sitting pose)