I see more movement in in these, especially the top one. 'Grats on the cool pose! But even bolder lines where the action is might've made them pop even more.
Nina, I like that these are loose and you're starting soft but they need more refinement. Make more deliberate marks to pin down the plant foot and gestural lines of the dancer.
If you start with the side of your pencil, once you block forms out, go back in with the point and really spell out parts of the contour.
I see more movement in in these, especially the top one. 'Grats on the cool pose! But even bolder lines where the action is might've made them pop even more.
ReplyDeleteNina,
ReplyDeleteI like that these are loose and you're starting soft but they need more refinement. Make more deliberate marks to pin down the plant foot and gestural lines of the dancer.
If you start with the side of your pencil, once you block forms out, go back in with the point and really spell out parts of the contour.